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*Page 149*
   * caption of fig 3.1: "hand side of(3.2)" => "hand side of (3.2)" (add a space)

*Page 151*
   * the second equation is missing the equation number. Also, sigma^2 doesn't appear in this equation, but appears in Fig 3.5, which is a bit confusing.

*Page 152*
   * last equation is missing the equation number.

*Page 154*
   * Fig 3.8: the words "object", "position" and "orientation" are missing some letters (not sure if our printer is at fault)

*Page 156*
   * ",for i=2,..." => ", for i=2,..." (insert a space after the comma)

*Page 158*
   * "such a probabilistic" => "such as probabilistic"

*Page 168*
   * "greater than than the prior" => "greater than the prior"

*Page 173*
   * Fig 3.27 caption: "blanked" => "blanket"

*Page 177*
   * "the marginals only involves" => "the marginals only involve"

*Page 179*
   * "a potential functions is" => "a potential function is"

*Page 180*
   * "may be updates" => "may be updated"
   * "max-product algorithm": in section 3.4, we only hear of sum-product, and max-sum.
   * bottom: "simple example in Figure 3.32" => "simple example in Figure 3.32 (a)"

*Page 181*
   * top: "Figure 3.32" => "Figure 3.32 (b)"

*Page 183*
   * "exists an directed" => "exists a directed" or "exists an undirected"
   * "This set is is distinct" => "This set is distinct"
   * Fig 3.34 caption: "together the set" => "together with the set"
   * "four variables show" => "four variables shown"

*Page 183* & *Page 184*
   * Fig 3.35 and Fig 3.36: the variables' names do not match the names in the text. 

*Page 184*
   * first line of 3.4: "problem if inference" => "problem of inference"

*Page 185*
   * "is set of numbers" => "is a set of numbers"

*Page 186*
   * Eq 3.42: not sure the last three dots (in both lines) should be there 

*Page 187*
   * last line: "procedure separately for each" => "procedure for each"

*Page 188*
   * first line: "O(N^2M^2)" I think should be "O(N^2K^2)"
   * "to propagate a messages" => "to propagate a message"
   * "need be evaluated" => "needs to be evaluated"

*Page 190*
   * second line: "is expressed" => "to be expressed"
   * middle: "variables nodes" => "variable nodes"

*Page 192*
   * caption of Fig 3.42: "A factor different graph" => "A different factor graph"

*Page 193*
   * "for particular variable" => "for a particular variable"

*Page 196*
   * "we see that that a messages" sounds English incorrect.

*Page 200*
   * Fig 3.51: It would be nice to add "f_a", "f_b" and "f_c" near the black squares.
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